The girl of summer herself, Ariel. Oh and title was in no way inspired by the Stereos. Tried a lot of new things with this one, and I'm happy with the turnout
First off, I really like the composition of this piece, and you know I like your work in general. >.< However, there are a few things I'd like to point out. Something about the eyes and her smile seem a bit... Joker-esque to me. I'm not sure if you'd be able to see the lower set of teeth from the way her head it held, but there is a bit too much red in the mouth. Or, you could change the eyes' expression to match the mouth. The two are in conflict to me. The only other thing I would change is the color of the tail to a brighter green to contrast more with the hair. Other than that, the anatomy is impeccable, and the movement of the body and hair is stunning. A beautiful piece.
Thanks! Haha its funny, when I finished I thought it reminded me of a different loish piece but not that one! And I'm only seeing now how similar they are XD
However, there are a few things I'd like to point out.
Something about the eyes and her smile seem a bit... Joker-esque to me. I'm not sure if you'd be able to see the lower set of teeth from the way her head it held, but there is a bit too much red in the mouth.
Or, you could change the eyes' expression to match the mouth. The two are in conflict to me. The only other thing I would change is the color of the tail to a brighter green to contrast more with the hair.
Other than that, the anatomy is impeccable, and the movement of the body and hair is stunning. A beautiful piece.
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